The Story Revamped

'As I lay there asleep in bed asleep snoring my lungs out, I was quite rudely awoken by a really loud ringing and buzzing sound. It was my alarm, I flew out of bed to turn it off as anyone would. As I turned it off I the realisation that I had a doctors appointment in half an hour set in i should FML as there was a very slim chance of me getting there in time. I got ready, cautiously watching the time. I was just about to leave my front door and then decided I wouldn't make it in time, so i turned around pondered what to eventually deciding to waste my day on the sofa sleeping and watching television'

Okay I need to rework this story, add something too it!!

'As I was laying their in bed happily snoring away. I was dreaming a bout cats in hats, one of them started meowing like an alarm clock. I soon realised my alarm was actually ringing rather than a cat meowing like an alarm. I lifted myself out of my bed to turn my alarm off. As i was doing this I looked at the time, it was 2:30pm. I thought great wasted half my day. Soon after I remembered I have a doctors appointment at 4:30pm, I was awake early so I could take my time with getting ready. I jumped in the shower then got dressed ready for my appointment, my appointment wasn't for anything serious just a check up with the nurse. I made some toast to pass the time. I soon noticed the clock it was 4pm this meaning I had half an hour to walk down, I knew this wasn't enough time, I quickly got my shoes on and left the door. I walked halfway down my steps then decided that I wasn't going to make it and turned back. I went back in took my shoes off, and wondered what I could do with the rest of my day, so i flicked on the television grabbed some snacks and turned on big bang theory.'

The reason I write out my story is because it makes it a hell of a lot easier for to visualise it within my head, making storyboards easier to draw.

Here are the storyboards I have done for the new story. they are somewhat similar to the previous, I also changed the story a tiny bit.